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0 posted 2002-01-29 04:26 AM


i try to change just for you.
but it doesn't work.
i said i would never change but i did.
my hair,my clothes,my style
i changed it all for you.

i promised my self i would never change,
but i did and it was all for you.
i use to be nothing.
now i am sumthing.
cus i changed.

i want to thank you.
you helped me change.
now i am a little short punk chic with attitude.
i'm aggressive.
i'm violent.
all because you i changed for you.

this is me now cus i have changed!
if you believed this your very gulliable.
cus i know i am who i am and i'll never change.
i am robin and that is who i will always be!

i am me don't tell me different!!

© Copyright 2002 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-29 04:43 PM


THATTA GIRL!
you are beautifully perfect just the way you are,don't let anyone tell you different and NEVER change for anyone.
wonderful write! love the graphic effects! LOL

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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2 posted 2002-01-30 06:05 AM


Great poem Robin, thank you for sharing it with us

Andrew says:
  *your so cute*
Skyfire says:
Cute?????? Oh, okay. But only from you

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3 posted 2002-01-30 06:09 AM


I loved this poem!  Glad you didn't change for anybody!  Hold on to your individuality it's what makes you YOU!  Keep up the good work!
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4 posted 2002-01-30 05:12 PM


Im definately gkllad you didnt change for anyone robin, your wonderful the way you are!!!!!! I liked this a lot hun..keep em comin!

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

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5 posted 2002-01-31 03:29 AM


*takes a bow* ty ty ty

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him DROOLZ*

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6 posted 2002-01-31 10:58 AM




YAY, Robin!

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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