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All I Needed
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All I Needed |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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“All I needed” The nights they seemed to last so long Forever was held in the palm of my hand Every time that you came around But then just like that you up and left Without even telling me Leaving me hanging Till someone else had the courage to tell All I needed was just one thing To shine a light through the darkenss Which you made special just for me Out of the false promises and lies that you fed It would have been so easy But you just strung me along Keeping there, pulling me with Like a little red wagon So many thoughts went through my head Visions and dreams saying without you I’d better off dead All I needed was just one thing To shine a light through the darkenss Which you made special just for me Out of the false promises and lies that you fed Tell me now how did it feel To see me fall every time you came around You must have smiled as you pushed the blade deeper In to my back, peircing my heart, brinigng me pain I’m ending this now, before it goes further Your lies and deciet Your malice and cruelty It all ends here, no more will it go I’m setting you free From heart From my love, for all eternity All I needed was just one thing To shine a light through that darkness Which you made special just for me Out the false promises and lies that you fed All that I needed was just that one thing To hear from your lips words that were true But now it seems that was just way to hard for you So now that I now how things really were All you have done All you have said Is but the echo of an empty memory Doomed to die in the chasms of the void within All I need was just one thing To chase away the shadows from my heart All I needed Was the truth It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww hunny this was sad but very well written. You expressed your feelings very well and i think thats very important when your upset about something..great piece ::hugs:: BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
A lot of emotions in this pieces you really expressed them well this is a tough situation to be in. Hang int here sweetie!  *for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time* |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
Wow! Great post, hun. Hope it all works out..which it will. For every rainstorm, there's a rainbow. Cheesy, eh/ Eh. Well, tis true-ish. Anyways! Excellent job on expressing your emotions here.  __o0o_Anna_o0o__ *HugZieS & WaveZieS* Friends r angels who lift u 2 ur feet when ur wings have trouble remembering how 2 fly. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
eeek...this is soo me i liked it alot. i dont understand why people cant just tell the truth. its gay and it hurts people. o well... we dont need that krap!but newho.... good poem. keep posting **dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Letting go is so hard to do, but the best thing sometimes. Very well done. You wrote this wonderfully, and I certainly enjoyed it I hope to see more soon. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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