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Teen Poetry #5

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Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-01-26 06:06 PM

F l y i n g . . .
S o a r i n g,
UP
above
the clouds.

S e a r c h i n g . . .
for home,
a place of long ago.

No longer there,
my memories still S
                  T
                  A
                  N
                  D there,
for they cannot be sold.

Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

1 posted 2002-01-26 08:22 PM

wonderful piece
interesting style...i really enjoyed it

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-26 10:46 PM

There have been times in my life where i've tried desperately to get back to that homely place that i so wish to have again but i cant seem to find it...but no the memories will never chang because ur right..they cant be sold

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2002-01-27 06:39 PM

I really enjoyed reading this piece of poetry, the style and format it was written in was very creative, thanks for sharing it with us

I wish I was a pigeon so that I could fly across the world

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-31 10:07 AM

Very interesting. I think the HTML put this poem in a completely different stand-point. Without it, I don't think I would have liked it much. But the creative style completely pulled me in.

Well done. I enjoyed this, but I think you could add on to it a bit. Put some more there... I would love to see a finished product of that

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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