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Jess_24
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since 2002-01-25
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0 posted 2002-01-25 06:59 PM


He sits by himself at a lone table.
He doesn't look up when he feels your stare.
He wears out of style clothes and talks kinda weird.
yet you hardly notice he's there.
What did he do to deserve all this pain?
Last year when he came you didn't say hi or ask any questions or even try.
Did it boost your ego when you made that joke about him waiting for a flood?
Maybe he isn't waiting because of you he's in a sea of lonliness.

I wrote this because I know how it feels to be the new kid no one talks to .


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Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22
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1 posted 2002-01-25 07:11 PM


YEAH JESSIKAH!!! Thats my sis! This is very good..I remember when you were the new kid at school. Boy that has been a long time ago. I'm glad God gave me such a wonderful friend..Take care. I hope to see you posting more on here very soon.
LOVE YA LOTS!
Your sis

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2 posted 2002-01-25 07:53 PM


Welcome To Passions!!!

We've all been the "new kid" in one point of our life so i think this can relate to us all in some way...i liked it a lot and i am definately looking forward to reading more of your work! Welcome again and keep those poems comin!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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3 posted 2002-01-25 09:52 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!

I think this was an excellent first post, and I'm glad that you found us! Can't wait to read more!

Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon

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4 posted 2002-01-27 09:33 PM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

I'm so glad that you've decided to koin us here at PIPtalk!  This is a wonderful way to start off... I enjoyed this very much, and I look forward to seeing more

Be sure to check your email for a special welcome

--Marie - Moderator/Passions in Poetry

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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