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The Boy that Hides in the Shadows
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The Boy that Hides in the Shadows |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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Once upon a time, when her world was bright and happy a boy of mystery entered her life exposed her heart and owned her soul he crept up unexpectedly and engulfed her with his glory took her feet right out from under her and so begins our story... This boy of magical amazement was the stuff that dreams were made of she never thought she'd me so lucky to find this dazzling kind of love he hid in ever corner of her once torn and shattered heart he used his emotional carpentry to keep it from falling apart the wonderment of how he made her feel was beyond the realm of understanding in fact it hardly seemed real she helplessly,hopelessly barley knowingly fell completey for the guy tho he love curdled the first time she wanted another try even just the sound of his name made her wear a smile it felt too damn good she knew it'd probably only last a while so as the leaves began to change so did the boy who became her everything something started falling off where's the ecstasy he used to bring? she knew the feelings he had would eventually stray its all she could expect living a million miles away she knows hes the most amazing guy after its all said and done thats one fact she'll never deny maybe she just missed the way things used to be or there was too much to regret but all the things he did for her she never will forget some where along the way she turned bitter and sour so everything they had was gone in one short hour she knows the boy he once strived to be is out there in the great unknown searching for her endlessly but the way she made this song play out was wrong undoubtedly from the start 'cause the boy now hides in the shadows when yesterday he hid in the corners of her heart The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow I really loved this, especially the last two lines. I really like your work and hope to see more around here  Zu Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
That hits home, wow..hehe have you been reading my journals =Þ it's amazing how you read another's work and so totally relate..loved it!!! Kristen |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Omg wow...i love poems like these..ya kno the ones that tell stories...i absolutely loved this...great job and keep em coming! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
Thank you all so much yeah it's a sad story,and it'll hurt for a little while but I know in the end it'll only make me stronger. Thanks for the support  *for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time* |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
HOLY WOW! I was reading this, and thinking...um, I think this girl is inside my head! This is exactly...I mean EXACTLY what I am going through, though every time I try to write about it I get mad at myself for letting him go. Thanks for putting it in words. I enjoyed this. Chrissy |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"he hid in ever corner of her once torn and shattered heart" This was very well written! It's amazing how love and both make you and break you in an instance. I really enjoyed this. You did a fine job.. I hope to see more soon --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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