navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » My Baby
Teen Poetry #5
Post A Reply Post New Topic My Baby Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
sad brown eyes
Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 19
Connecticut U.S

0 posted 2002-01-25 12:56 PM


Hey i havnt written in a while but heres some new stuff that i came up with.

He said he loved me and would never leave me.
Promised me allthese great things.
Toldme hewould never lieto me.
If words that were said were never meant than, the words i would never hear.
But when decisions had to get made things started to go down the  drain.
We are so confused and we dontknow what to do.
I promised him i would never cry but that was a lie.
He's my world, my love, my everything.
Do you think he's sees?
I hope he dont leave.
What would my life be?
His future was suppost to be with me.
He told me.
So he cantleave me, right?
Its not what is suppost to be.
My life and dreams would shatter if he had ever said goodbye to me.
He's my BABY!!



© Copyright 2002 Renee - All Rights Reserved
Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
1 posted 2002-01-25 05:59 PM


its great to have these feelings for someone and have the returned isn't it?
I hope he doesnt leave
best of luck!

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you.  Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Jess_24
New Member
since 2002-01-25
Posts 5
Boone,Arkansas
2 posted 2002-01-25 06:21 PM


Wow. That has a lot of emotion in it that I'm feeling right now. I hope everything works out for you.
xShUgArHiGhx
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
3 posted 2002-01-26 11:36 PM


This was full of emotion..you could definately feel it in the words. ::hugs::

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » My Baby

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary