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rubberband
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Will be half Swiss one day

0 posted 2002-01-24 09:57 PM



Days Like This

I hate days like this
When she leaves my bro and sis
Even me behind
Only to be left in our minds.

I know it happens to all of us
Them leaving is a must
But since I was six
We have been in this fix.

She takes us everywhere in her heart
And her bragging is like a work of art
Every once in awhile we get a call
or a e-mail that says "Hey, All!".

Our life can be tough
But her love is enough.
To know she is on the road here and there
Is our biggest scare.

She gets in her car
To travel a far
And the moment she's gone
That's when I begin to miss her!


*I love you where ever you are!May the Highway Angel watch over you! *

Put your past behind you, not you past in front of you!

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1 posted 2002-01-25 02:18 AM


AAWWW! I take it she left today? *hugs to Amy* I've never realised this is how you feel when she goes

Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon

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2 posted 2002-01-26 04:33 PM


A very touching piece of poetry, keep on posting so I can more of your great poetry.

Andrew

Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it.

gymnast
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3 posted 2002-01-26 05:02 PM


This poem is lovely!  I hope the highway angel watches over her too!  hang in there and don't worry, she'll be fine!  Great poem too!  Keep up the good work!
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4 posted 2002-01-26 10:50 PM


Im shur that the highway angel is keeping a close eye on her...she'll be fine im shur

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

rubberband
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5 posted 2002-01-27 10:35 PM


Thank you everyone.  It is quiet hard when she leaves.  Sometimes I just want to cry.
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6 posted 2002-01-28 07:00 PM


This is lovely... but it must be hard getting to know the back of her head to well.



Well done.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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7 posted 2002-01-28 11:59 PM


Amy, I can tell you that you have found a fan in one of the best writers in here (Zu!). Keep writing darling, I'm gonna start hounding you if you don't

Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon

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