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DayDreamer99
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0 posted 2002-01-24 02:42 PM



Your eyes dancing with mischeif
Taunting, Almost begging me
To run away with you
Leaving the world behind
I smile,Hoping you realize
I'd follow you to the ends of the World

Tifferz..

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TigerZ
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1 posted 2002-01-24 03:28 PM


=) so cool....i love it!

A life without loveā€¦is no life at all.

Shygirl82
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2 posted 2002-01-24 11:10 PM


Very cute...short but to the point.  Thanks for sharing
~Nikki~

Smile!!  You never know who may be falling in love with it...

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3 posted 2002-01-26 11:45 PM


I think eyes are absolutely amazing...this poem was short and sweet and definately enjoyable Thanks for sharing!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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4 posted 2002-01-31 09:59 AM


Eyes can say so very much with one glance, eh?

I really enjoyed this.  The power of eyes is a wonderful thing.  Job well done

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

vlraynes
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5 posted 2002-02-28 06:54 PM



DayDreamer-
I love the upbeat and happy feel of this.
Very nicely penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-28-2002 07:02 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-03-01 07:10 PM


HaHaHa. I love it. Quite cute, and perky.

~ Titus

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