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SlowDrag
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since 2002-01-10
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Tx...need i say more

0 posted 2002-01-23 06:23 PM


this is a song about my band and my best friends.


The band we'd start
was just a dream in our hearts
look at us now,
playin for this tiny crowd.

you're my brothers
there are no others
who can...
make me laugh the way you can.

chorus
throw away our fighting
we're up here reciting,
the music that we've grown to love.
no matter what life may bring,
i'll just stand up here and sing,
the music taht you know i love.

we may not be the rest,
but we sure beat the best,
in our hearts
and taht's all that really matters now.


"Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..."

© Copyright 2002 Eric - All Rights Reserved
BrokenAngel
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since 2002-01-06
Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA
1 posted 2002-01-23 08:17 PM


Aside from a few typos, I think it great.  Keep writting!!

---Night Angel

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2 posted 2002-01-27 06:34 PM


Thank you for sharing this with us, good luck with your band I hope you guys have fun

Zu

I wish I was a pigeon so that I could fly across the world

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