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CwboyAtHeart
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0 posted 2002-01-23 12:01 PM


Hello.  This one I wrote tonight.  People always tell me how the notice that I'm like, always smiling, not matter where I'm at.  This is just kind a corny poetic explanation of why I'm always smiling...  It's dumb, I know, but let me know what you think.

SMILE ALL THE TIME

I smile all the time
Because I’m often confused
If I smile
I look like I know
What’s going on
Which leaves everybody else
Confused with me
So keep in mind
When all else fails…
    Smile!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

© Copyright 2002 C.K.N. - All Rights Reserved
zarina
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1 posted 2002-01-23 04:10 AM


Not your best, but good tough.
It's quite true.

I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you?

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2 posted 2002-01-23 08:42 PM


"If I smile
I look like I know
What’s going on"


I love it!!!! It's not dumb at all, it's poetic genius in my opinion!!! Great job Cody!! Thanks for sharing this one as well! Do you mind if I print it out and stick it on my binder? LMAO... so great!!

Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon

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3 posted 2002-01-27 12:08 PM


LoL this is kinda funny...i enjoyed this cody!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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4 posted 2002-01-31 10:04 AM


SO TRUE!!  This made me think of how often those around me feel like they need to wear masks... smile even it hurts to smile.  And.. you're not smiling in your picture!  

  Well done, Cody.  I enjoyed this.  Hope to see more soon..

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

vlraynes
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5 posted 2002-02-28 07:07 PM



Cody-
LOL...this is cute.
Made me smile with you..
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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