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0 posted 2002-01-22 07:45 PM


"It's a start"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

V1:
All I ever wanted was to be, a part of your life, but I guess I blew it tonight.
I just made one to many mistakes, and it's not Ok, and I wish that I could erase,
Everything that I have done, every single lie that I've told.
Everytime I turned and ran, everytime I left you cold...

B:
Now listen I agree, with everything you throw at me.
And I know that you're sad, and I wish I could take it back,
Every single thing I did tonight, but I can't, I'm sorry I can't...

C:
But I promise you from now on, there's only your heart,
I know that sorry doesn't cover it, but girl it's a start.
Now girl if it was possible ,I'd buy you a star.
I know that a smile's far from what we had, but girl it's a start.

V2:
And I'm so afraid that I have, lost you forever, I still picture us together...
Sorry for the pain I put you through, don't know what to do, because I'm still in love with you.

B:
Now listen I agree, with everything you throw at me
And I know that you're sad, and I wish I could take it back,
Every single thing I did tonight, but I can't, I'm sorry I can't...

C:
But I promise you from now on, there's only your heart,
I know that sorry doesn't cover it, but girl it's a start.
Now girl if it was possible ,I'd buy you a star.
I know that a smile's far from what we had, but girl it's a start.
(2x)

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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This waS WRITTEN VERY WELL bRIAN...NICELY DONE tHANKS FOR SHARING!

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