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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
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Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-01-22 06:32 PM



        Almost Lost You As A Friend

We've been best friends,
sence 2ed grade.
I would always tell you everything,
as you did the same.

We would go and do everything together.
Where one was,
there was the other,
we were practically inseparable.

We never fought with each other,
that was until 10th grade,
when we got in a fight over a guy.

It lasted for 3 weeks,
our longest fight ever,
but we made up,
and became inseparable again.

Then I started going out,
with this guy.
Everything seemed cool at first,
but then you and I,
stopped talking as much,
and didn't spend as much time together,
as we use to.

We were starting to grow apart,
all because of me.

I let the one thing,
that I swore,
would never get between us,
a guy.

Because I choose,
to spend most of my time,
with him,
and barely talk,
nor spend time with you,
I almost lost you as a friend.

I never knew,
how much you ment to me,
until it was to late.

How could I have been so stupid?  

© Copyright 2002 Heather - All Rights Reserved
CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
1 posted 2002-01-23 01:06 AM


It sucks to be separated from good friends fo stupid reason, huh?  I hope that your friendship is able to be put back together.  The poem was good, it captured your emotions well, great write.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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2 posted 2002-01-23 11:01 PM


Small things can put such distance between two people.  It's inevitable.

Good luck, I hope things work out between you two

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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3 posted 2002-01-27 12:14 PM


Im so glad that you didnt lose her because that would be a shame

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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