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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
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0 posted 2002-01-22 06:05 PM


Are we really,
meant to be?

If we are,
then why,
did it take so long,
for us to get together?

Why 8 months,
after we go out,
do I have to move?

Is it a test,
to see how strong,
our love is,
for each other?

To see if,
we make it,
or not?

Or are we just,
not meant to be?

[This message has been edited by Baby_Angel123 (01-23-2002 12:58 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-22 11:27 PM


In a way i sort of believe that ur situation is a test..i mean im a believer that everthing happens for a reason..i liked your poem a lot...Thanks for sharing

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Dark Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-01-22 11:37 PM


You never can tell what's meant to be and what's not. So don't let those ideas consume you or put you down. You can't know. Simple as that.

My advice if you're going to try out a long distance relationship (I live in Maryland and my boyfriend lives in North Carolina and we've been together for a year and 2 months so I have some experience in this department.) .... the frustration, pain, and loneliness of a long distance relationship gets under your skin. Which can lead to angry fights about nothing important, hurtful comments, etc. etc. so just try and keep that in mind. Also, you have to truly trust the person to be faithful and honest. Without trust... there's no relationship. I wish you both the best of luck. If it doesn't work out, then it was probably because you were meant for someone else.

Anywho, this was a nice little poem with a simplicity I can respect... especially since you're talking about some serious emotions here. Thanks for posting this.

Jaime



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[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (01-22-2002 11:39 PM).]

~*brittt*~
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3 posted 2002-01-23 11:26 AM


HEATHER!!!! I didnt know you posted here! YAY!! Im really sad that youre going away and i already told you that i think that you and dan are gonna makr it. u guys r so cute!! good luck!
~britt

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