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Baby_Angel123
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0 posted 2002-01-22 06:02 PM


      A Love That Words Can Not Describe

I say I love you,
all the time,
and I do.

But whenever,
I say it,
I feel as though,
I haven't said it enough.

That you still,
don't know,
how much,
I love you.

Everytime,
I try to find,
the right words,
to express my love for you,
I can never seem,
to find them.

There just doesn't,
seem to be a big enough,
word or phrase,
to express,
my love for you.

Nothing that is,
except for,
I love you,
more then life it's self.

But yet,
that still,
isn't enough.

For my love,
is even greater,
and continues to grow,
each and every day,
that I'm with you.

[This message has been edited by Baby_Angel123 (01-23-2002 01:05 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-22 10:21 PM


Can't help but love being in love!
You expressed the feeling very well
as far as my opinion is concerned!
Great work!

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2 posted 2002-01-22 11:45 PM


Three little words just aren't enough... and then beyond that... where do you start? Yeah, I know what you mean. Hopefully he knows and understands that when you say "I love you"... you mean so much more. Thanks for posting.

Jaime

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3 posted 2002-01-23 10:43 AM


It doesn't really matter how loudly you can say it, how many times you can say it or even how you say it... It matters only that you mean it, and he knows it.

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4 posted 2002-01-24 04:58 PM


Aww this is so cute!!! I feel the same exact way...i hope you diont mind if i send this to my boyfriend and i tell him i saw this on PIP and it reminded me of him If you mind please tell me b/c i'd love to send it!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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