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0 posted 2002-01-22 02:15 PM



If you love me
Je vous aimerai
  (I will love you)

If you hold me
Je cous tiendrai
  (I will hold you)

If you want me
Je vous voudrai
  (I will want you)

If you don't hurt me
Je ne vous blesserai pas
  (I won't hurt you)
To... somebody...

Just... something I wrote in about five minutes. Would have been less time, but it takes a while for those online translators to work *smirks*

Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon

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1 posted 2002-01-22 02:39 PM


LMAO.... is that French? I enjoyed it. The two languages was interesting. It was a bit short to me, but nonetheless, I still enjoyed it. You work rules. Like you.

Titus

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2 posted 2002-01-22 02:53 PM


The basic rules of a decent relationship... you get what you give. Brownie points for the french. This was a nice little change from the norm. Thanks for posting it.

Jaime



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3 posted 2002-01-22 02:53 PM


So cute

And where is he to reply?? Come on in...somebody.

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

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4 posted 2002-01-22 04:32 PM


*grins* Who says he lives here?

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5 posted 2002-01-22 05:19 PM


LIVES here? Hmm... more like graces these blue pag...oops did I say that?

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

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6 posted 2002-01-22 08:12 PM


Yes, he definately graces them... *sighs*

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7 posted 2002-01-22 09:59 PM


You were actually paying attenion in all your years of Frech 9,10 and 11?  Or did you learn through osmosis?  Hey it could have been the brain gym in french 10 that made you remember.  Je suis un pizza..   Pretty soon I will call you Osmosis Rhonda!

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8 posted 2002-01-23 01:33 AM


LMAO!! Brain gym!!!! I'd forgotten all about that one, babe! Osmosis Rhonda. I like it! Yes, Ti, it is French. It would have been longer, but I couldn't think of anything else to say in it. I think it works though

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9 posted 2002-01-23 09:19 AM


What a wonderful poem, I love French (the language of lovers) it's just a shame I can't speak any... keep on writing this fantastic poetry

Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it.

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10 posted 2002-01-23 06:12 PM


I speak a little french too, and this is lovely, I wish I could remember more
but it's been a few years since high school!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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11 posted 2002-01-23 08:43 PM


Well I took 3 yrs of French lol lemme see if I can remember ANY of it

J'mappelle Jennifer.
Comment tu tappelle?

Je vais bien.

hehe there you go

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12 posted 2002-01-23 10:07 PM


I think that was the only thing I remembered..  And there was Eva..   Can't forget about her!And our robot...  And our fashion show...  French class is sneaking up on me...  Make it stop...
You should do another French poem.   That was great!

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13 posted 2002-01-23 11:00 PM


ROTFL @ Amy!!! Eva... she was always worth a laugh. Do you really want me to do another French poem? I was thinking another one maybe... Spanish has been drawing me lately too... Bloody robot LOL.

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14 posted 2002-01-24 03:05 AM


okk.. Thats not bad for a first time with french but... you know those translator on the net arent really good hehe. But good try
and if you want to write anything else in french dont be shy and ask me I can help you!

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15 posted 2002-01-24 10:01 PM


Yes you should do another one.  You were always really good with French.  But Spanish..?  You didn't take any lessons...! But if you can, then go right ahead!   Eva was a laugh but what about M. Karlen?  She was a hoot!

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16 posted 2002-01-25 01:47 AM


I dont' know french very well, I dropped it after Gr 9.....this was good though!! the translations helped
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17 posted 2002-01-26 11:42 PM


LoL yea the translations definately helped out a lot. I thought it was interesting how you mixed in 2 languages..i liked it a lot rhon..

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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