To write this well without re-thinking everything definitely shows much talent on your part. It's also good that you know how to listen and trust your own soul to flow out onto the page. Thank you for posting this. It was a pleasure.
-- the calm before the storm --
Aww...this was really nice. Sometimes, when you rethink each word over and over again, it sounds messier and messier...well, that's what happens to me, but oh well...o_O; I thought it was really clean and easy to read because of it. Metaphorically, it was beautiful. Thanks for the read! ^_^
Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...
braces? what braces? *squints @ the pic but doesnt see any*
kiley, this is one of my fav pieces from you.. it had the normal greatness to it because youre a great writer and one of my favs from pip.. but this one just had a differnt feel to it. its nice seeing a glimpse of your soul and all the honesty that we get in this write without all the re-hashing that so many of us do to make things perfect. sometimes things are better without all the touch-ups. jmo tiff
“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”
I know Im not perfect but I can smile & I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes