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TopGunLauren
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0 posted 2002-01-22 01:15 AM


Leave me alone I don't care anymore,
I just want this war to end.

Stop calling my house saying that I'm thretening you.
Because it's not me doing it my friends are.

Even though I don't like you I've still told them to stop,
So stop trying to turn my parents against me.

You say you never had a problem with me,
Then why did you have your friend get in my face and then go key my car.

But what happened is over with so let it go,
I have even though it hurt me worse then you'll ever know.

There is no way I can make everyone leave you alone,
But you brought this on yourself.

So I'm out of this I'm so fed up with all the drama.
And who knows maybe some day I'll be able to forgive you.

   Lauren

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aaron woodside
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1 posted 2002-01-22 03:43 AM


Whoa,  As a master of the obvious I need to say, you seem a little ticked off at this person.  I hope you actually told her(??) most of this though instead of letting it go unspoken.  

ex animo,
Aaron

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2 posted 2002-01-22 12:17 PM


So I'm out of this I'm so fed up with all the drama.
And who knows maybe some day I'll be able to forgive you.

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Ugh, I really hate it when you're trying to move on from something and the other person involved just won't let it go. It's like... why drag out the pain? Why go on with the drama? I don't know what happened, but I feel for you. I've been in situations that sound similar to this one. I hope you can get all this sorted and move on. Thanks for posting.

Jaime

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3 posted 2002-01-23 03:01 PM


Whoa... lots of negativity in this one.  *hugs*  I hope you work things out.  I know it's hard, but try talking to the person?

Take care.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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4 posted 2002-01-27 12:06 PM


There is definately a lot of anger in this piece...i think you expressed ur feelings nicely but its unfortunate that this is happening ::hugs::

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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5 posted 2002-01-27 03:26 PM


Wow, anger.  Haven't felt that in a long time.  Thanks for reminding me what if feels like.  I've been in this situation.  Great write.

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

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