Teen Poetry #5 |
The Poet's Creed |
PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Misery Leads to words/ without words it all blurs. We feel supreme joy/ we have no need to be coy. The ups and the downs/ we're free to be like the clonws. We share of the scars/ we dream to the likes of Mars. Deeper we feel the need/ be genuine, we ask - the poet's creed. Share in the beauty of words/ we mingle in the ballroom of all nouns and verbs. Through the verses we rise/ but not so high as to not hear the cries. We are poets without remorse/ accept if you wish/set another course. Be genuine/be genuine; live the poet's creed. 1/20/02 |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
"Share in the beauty of words/ we mingle in the ballroom of all nouns and verbs" Is by far my favourite line, what did I get out of this? Total inspiration!! that's all I can say..and it brought a smile to this face... Kristen |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Deeper we feel the need/ be genuine, we ask - the poet's creed. I love it dear! Excellent job! Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great job hun...interesting write yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Through the verses we rise/ but not so high as to not hear the cries. ***************************************** The story of my life. The beauty of poetry is that anyone can do it. It's everywhere... and there's always some kind of truth in it all.. because poetry is genuine. (as you have said) Thank you for posting this. I really enjoyed reading it. Jaime -- the calm before the storm -- |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thanks everyone. Much appreciated! Titus It's Like The Face Inside Is Right Beneath My Skin |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
Great poem!: : |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I loved this... perfect to share with poets... "Deeper we feel the need/ be genuine, we ask - the poet's creed." We all sing the same song. Beautiful work. Enjoyed... and looking forward to more --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Well thought out ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thanks Titus The Sun Always Rises. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Share in the beauty of words/ we mingle in the ballroom of all nouns and verbs I thought this was GREAT..very well-written. Thanks for sharing ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Titus, I really enjoyed the read, you have penned some wonderful thoughts here to make a great poem. Hope to see more of your work around Zu Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Nik, Zu, thanks. I appreciate your words. I don't write poetry for myself, I right it for any human who cares to read. And you did, and you liked. Thanks Titus Find me a pidgeon, and then I'll know where Zu and Sky are. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great job hun! i loved it keep up the good work.love ya! robin i have a wish but only a certain guy can fufill it! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thanks Titus Find me a pidgeon, and then I'll know where Zu and Sky are. |
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Roberta Little Junior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 42beloit wi usa |
that was soo great! i loved it. thanks 4 posting it. you are a great writer. GOD's greatist gift is LOVE |
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Demonic Illusion Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 50 |
*dances around* sorry just thought of a good beat to go with that...pretty catchy really....very nice work {|;o) Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titus- EXCELLENT! I'm liking this one a whole bunch! Very nicely penned. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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