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0 posted 2002-01-21 02:01 AM


All I want is a chance
to know a true and real romance.
It seems that I will be destined
to a life of lonely lessons.

Love surrounds me,
but will never touch.
So I'm doomed to a life of lust.


(short but sweet)

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1 posted 2002-01-21 02:10 AM


yeha....thats exactly my thinkin too, sucks, eh?
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2 posted 2002-01-21 09:30 AM


The two most important lessons you learn from are love and pain.
Look at it that way.  *hugs*

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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3 posted 2002-01-21 12:45 PM


I feel like this sometimes too..definately short and sweet

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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4 posted 2002-01-23 10:30 AM


That's me too... *sigh*
Hope we all find love soon...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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5 posted 2002-02-06 12:37 PM


This is a great poem! I likied the way you worded the last line the most . . . Good job!

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

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6 posted 2002-02-07 12:41 PM


i feel that way too i hope you find a wonderful person who you can love and who will love you back best of luck and i liked the poem it was short and sweet and to the point! =D

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

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