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HVNsnt82086 Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 30United States |
We never talk. Not unless I call you. You say we're friends, but I have nothing to show to prove it. I feel so separated from you. All I want is to call you a friend. If I don't have you, then I don't have anyone. I just don't understand why I'm so alone. "So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh wow... I was there once. He'll come to his senses after a while. Just give it time. He'll realize what he's missing out on soon enough  For now, give some space.Good luck! --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I have had situations like that...i understand completely..nice job yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Beautiful work here. Short, and sweet. I wish you luck in this situation; for a while, it was be hard. But the sun always rises.Sincerely, Titus It's Like The Face Inside Is Right Beneath My Skin |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Unless you're struck blind...then the sun doesn't come up again. Anyway, I liked this one. Good job.-Adam "If life is so significant, then why do we die?" |
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