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Bleeding Eyes
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Bleeding Eyes |
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Smlie4u87 Junior Member
since 2001-04-28
Posts 16 |
Bleeding Eyes Everyday I feel like crying. The tears that roll drown my face, Is all the hurt within me. I never smile anymore. I have no reason to. All I do is bleed. Tearswithin me Is all I have. Once again I lost the game. Once I'm on top I always fall. Again I thought I find real friends, But I didn't. I guess I was never met to. I guestion weather or not I should live. I always feel pain. I just want to hide from this world. I can't bear to look it in the face. For now my eyes are bleeding. No ones here for me to talk to. They took my only soul. And crushed my priade. Everything of my is gone, Takin away from me. Alone I stand in this world as one. I guestion if anyone would care If I take my own like with my own hands. They don't seem to. They don't seem to open up they eyes And look at my bleeding eyes. They see right past and though me. I walk alone in this world With my bleeding eyes in my hands. I can't see my ways. For I have none. My path has ended And so has the like of my. The bleeding eyes have ended as well. For they can't bleed where they are now. The ones who didn't seem to care Are yet the ones I still care for And where I am now I look over them. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow..amazing post!! Great job and full of emotion!! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
This is really good... and it really hit home with me. I've felt exactly like this. But you have done what I could not, and that is putting it into words. I hope things get better for you. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is really a sad one, and I'm wondering if you're writing about your personal experience. I hope not, coz it's pretty tragic. But if you are, I hope you'll find greener pastures, meet better people, and have truer friends.  The friends you mentioned were not as good as you thought, but basically, that's what life is. We meet many people, and our judgement may not always be right, but once you meet your really good buddies, they're there for life, so don't despair just yet.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh wow, I'm sure many people here can relate to what you're saying here. This is a hard thing to deal with. Being betrayed by friends is always a hard thing, but if they betray you then they weren't your true friends anyway. Hang in there. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
This is how I am feeling right now..nobody really to talk to..very strong emotions, very very powerful...quite tragic though... Kristen |
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