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Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2002-01-18 10:59 PM

I always had eyes
But I rarely could speak
All the hello’s and hi’s
Were the tries
Though so weak
And I cannot defend
That my heart went too far
When I told you
My friend
That I love who you are
And I know that its hard
‘Cause I’ve been here before
I just let down my guard
When I came to your door
I was hoping on chance
I was leaving behind
To the thoughts of romance
All the truth on my mind
And that’s all I have now
Still I’m looking behind
Over-asking me how
Could I be so damn blind
And I find
That this game
Is just trial by fire
No person to blame
Just relentless desire
To hold someone close
And feel loved in return
But I always love those
Who have bridges to burn
Now I’m stranded again
On the opposite side
Wishing that I had been
Someone more dignified
So I call out your name
And hope to catch a smile
But its not the same
And wont be for a while

I know my surprise
May make some call me weak
But I always had eyes
I just never could speak

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-01-18 11:02 PM

Aww kevin hunny...this is so sad but so beautifully written...amazing job...::hugs::

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2002-01-19 10:25 AM

Ahhh I know what this is about

No worries Kevin, there will be others more worthy, and in time even she might come around. Never ever regret being honest with her...you needed that, and so did she. Going out on a limb and taking risks happens in love sometimes. *hugs*

Good write babe
Jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2002-01-19 11:23 AM

Don't juz use your eyes, let her know...

You seem to be crying out in muted voice, but I think it's time for you to shout. If you really still care for her, let her know

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-19 05:18 PM

I really like this... it sounded like it could be an awesom rap too.. heh

I understand what you mean here. Just hang in there..

Hope to see more soon.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-01-19 05:20 PM

Oh my gosh, Kevin, what a beautiful piece. Great imegry (?), wonderful flow... you painted a pciture I could see clearly, a feeling I could perfectly. Greatly done here, my friend.

Good luck in the journey ahead.

Sincerely,
Titus

Smile, Jesus loves you. :)

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