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Wheelsgirl
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0 posted 2002-01-18 08:02 PM


Stories

What are they?
People say they can inspire you to challenge yourself at times.
And you can usually learn from them…
But can the person who’s telling them learn from them too?

Stories can also be used as little white lies.
Once you start telling these “white lies” you start to believe them yourself.
Eventually you make up these stories so much that you just can’t stop.
Because that’s all you know how to do.

The stories help you get attention and you like that…
You know you do… You can’t deny it because you know it’s true!

You know who you are… Don’t deny the facts…
Because someday your so called “friends” just might see past the stories and all the way to the truth…
The truth for you will hurt… They’ll hurt because the only friend you’ll have is yourself!

© Copyright 2002 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
crazymin83
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1 posted 2002-01-18 09:29 PM


What are you trying to do? hurt me? I have real friends.

"If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D"

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2 posted 2002-01-18 10:40 PM


Ummm whats goin on???

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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3 posted 2002-01-19 12:58 PM


Yeah, I sense some undercurrent here. Hope nothing is going wrong. But then, friends can be real and loyal, and they may not. What matters is that you're clear who are your true friends, and be sure you never hurt these true friends. The rest you can just ignore their ploys to hurt you, but on your side, remember not to do unto others what you don't want others to do unto you.

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4 posted 2002-01-19 01:19 PM


Well said Mon Cherie. I can't put it much better.

Sincerely,
Titus

Smile, Jesus loves you. :)

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5 posted 2002-01-19 05:36 PM


This is very sad.  I always feel for the people who have to make up such lives about their life becuase they're not satisfied with what they really have.
This is well written.  I enjoyed it, and hope to see more soon

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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