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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida 
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You gave me wings to fly, you told me I could fly you pushed and pushed me off that edge until I learned to fly never once did you give up now It's your turn to spread your wings and fly to be free as a bird dont look back because you know I am there watching you leave me we will soon fly together not solo but until you learn to fly I am behind you all the way like a mother bird and her baby don't give up and don't look back just fly north and I will catch up "Water Over Matter" |
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BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA |
I liked it just I'm trying to figure out what you mean by it. It will more than likely come to me, I'm having a blond day, but it's a wonderful work. ---Night Angel |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Very motivating...something i like to see everynow and then between the love poems and the poems of rage posted here...thank you for sharing! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is very sweet!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Very nicely done!  I loved it! Very inspiring, very nicely done, sweet, and fun to read. (can you tell I liked it?)  Wonderful job.Sincerely, Titus Smile, Jesus loves you. :) |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It's very hard to let go like this You did a wonderful job on this poem. I enjoyed it. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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