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Ree Ree
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since 06-28-2001
Posts 57
providence, RI


0 posted 01-17-2002 04:07 PM       View Profile for Ree Ree   Email Ree Ree   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ree Ree's Home Page   View IP for Ree Ree

We're lost now
  aren't we?
Unremembered, uncared for
     unwanted
frozen in the winter's violent chill
Dark summer nights
no longer fill out time
   or our memories
   they go on forgotten as well.

Hackie sack, beaches, dancing in the streets
certainly not for these
   winter storms
  turbulent and unforcasted
no one knows what will
   happen now
  or in the future.
  The future lies
   unknown.

Freezing days
  chilling wind, frozen soul
   will this
  never ending confusion
never end???
  Life not seeming
   worthwhile
          or
   having any purpose
  no leaves one the tress
  no birds in the sky
   empty, cold, unimportant.

We're lost
    forever!??
  No way out
    of this
   cold winter.
  No way to
    find the dark summer nights
        of warm
     assuring
assurance.
  To find the leaves
     so full
and the birds
   happy
  completely content.

All I ever wanted was
   a summer night
of my own
  to share with you
  to last through
    an eternity
  to hold on to
      FOR
    FOREVER....


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HiddenSparklez
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since 12-29-2000
Posts 191
British Columbia, Canada


1 posted 01-17-2002 06:20 PM       View Profile for HiddenSparklez   Email HiddenSparklez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HiddenSparklez

Great poem about the relationship between nature and life. It kinda reminded me about graduation and how I never wanted it to end... Great job tho!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs


2 posted 01-18-2002 10:10 AM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

I enjoyed this one a lot too!!! Im starting to get attached to your certain kinda format..keep those poems comin!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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Lurking


3 posted 01-19-2002 04:37 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Wow another long one... I didn't like this as much as the other but it still is very good

Andrew

"All things must end, but I can see my fate in your eyes" -Turin Breaks

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4 posted 01-19-2002 07:29 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

Another very stylistic poem.  I enjoyed this a lot, Ree Ree.  you're a very talented poet.

Remember to reply to other's poems too.  That's an important part of PIP

I look forward to seeing more.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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Listening to every heart


5 posted 01-18-2003 06:28 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Ree Ree...have you found what you're looking for?  Let me know if you need help.
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