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Cinderelly
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0 posted 2002-01-16 12:55 PM


Early morning run,
out before the sun.

Set a steady pace,
as the morning mist hits my face.

Alone w/ my thoughts,
just me and the wind.

Running set my soul free,
the road just lets me be.

Early morning run,
out before the sun.


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1 posted 2002-01-16 04:52 AM


mmmmm, I know that feeling....feels SO good! I loved the poem! brought me right back there!
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2 posted 2002-01-16 07:52 AM


Yes, the feeling of wind in your face... It's just so refreshing, and a good way of clearing your mind for deeper thoughts, though I personally prefer to cycle than to jog.

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3 posted 2002-01-16 08:44 AM


Hmm...kinda serene feel to it all. Very nice. I prefer longer poems, but this one was kinda groovy.

-Adam

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4 posted 2002-01-17 01:11 PM


I liked this... short, but you made the reader feel it.

Me?  Heh, I wish I could run like that.  sounds peaceful.  I enjoyed this, as always Looking forward to more!

--Marie

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5 posted 2002-01-17 06:34 PM


Very nice poem...i loved it and i was right there in it...

=)  Please keep 'em coming

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6 posted 2002-01-18 10:08 AM


This was a great poem...i actually always want to go running before school because i think it'll make me feel great for the rest of the day but theres one problem...I HATE RUNNING..lol yea so i never go Im glad you do!!! Nice poem Keep em comin!

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