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BrokenAngel
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0 posted 2002-01-13 07:16 PM



Now that you're gone
Who do I trust?
All the ones I did trust
Have now hurt me
Have now left me
Now that you're gone
Who do I run to?
It was you I always turned to
You made me feel safe
You made my pain go away
Now that you're gone
Where do I go?
I have no place to go
I have no place to be
Now that you're gone

---Night Angel

© Copyright 2002 Hannah Rochelle Garner - All Rights Reserved
inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
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1 posted 2002-01-13 08:56 PM


Good Poem Wonderful!


read mah new one plz!


Luv,
~~inspiredpoetwriter~~

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

TopGunLauren
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2 posted 2002-01-13 09:18 PM


Awsome poem I really like it!
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

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3 posted 2002-01-13 10:22 PM


Its so hard having a safe haven disappear...whenever something like that happens to me it leaves me feeling vulnerable and like a child..you have to know that u CAN get by without that person..be strong hun ::hugs::

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Melster
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4 posted 2002-01-13 10:45 PM


Broken Angel,

Mend those paths and lift your head, I know how you feel to lose that special person who always boosts you when you need them, always there when they know you need it.  Remember that times are tough, but they will get better, don't hide yourself from the world and keep your head high and thegood times will come back and you will find someone to do the job this person once did.  I like everyone else, am here for you!!  

MelZ!!!

Keep up the great work!!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

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5 posted 2002-01-14 12:16 PM


Hannah, this is just one of the many rough patches we have to go through in life. Just remind yourself that this will be over soon, learn to be strong and independent, and try not to let this affect you in a negative way. One day, you'll find that the sun shines for you again.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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6 posted 2002-01-15 05:48 PM


I just hope things to get better for you
I know its hard to lose someone, but you need to stay strong
the right person, one day, will come
good luck and God bless

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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