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Alyssa
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0 posted 2002-01-12 10:26 PM


it hurts...
that your not even trying
to at least be there
when i need you to

yousay you love me
i see it in your eyes
i believe you
but sometimes you dont try

you leave when it gets bad
you pick the worst times to go
and when i need you most
ur never really there

i know were far apart
but you could still wait for me
wheni say ill be back
i mean it cant you see?

im not one to lie
i tell you everything with honesty
so when i said id be back
you leave anyway

it hurts so bad right now
you left and it might be the last time we speak
for all hell is breaking loose
and me and you, might be through
(and i cant believe you left..if only you knew...)

i love you very much
you love me too, i know
but they dont and they have control
and theres nothin to do

....hey wheres the cream filling?!...

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1 posted 2002-01-12 11:10 PM


it's hard to love someoen when distance comes in the way. i can reall feel how much you care for this person. and i insure you, if it was meant to be, it will be. good write and good luck.
-ab

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
       -Thaddeus Golas

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2 posted 2002-01-13 12:14 PM


*hugs Alyssa* Guys suck, hon. it'll all be okay eventually. I don't know what else to say... *hugs again*

I used to be open minded, but all my brains fell out

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3 posted 2002-01-13 12:58 PM


aww hun i understand ya i've had the same situation before...::hugs:: hope all gets better

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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4 posted 2002-01-13 01:06 PM


*sigh* I guess it takes alot for a guy to finally learn to be sensitive and stick around when you need him. But don't worry, I hope everything works out for you soon!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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5 posted 2002-01-13 01:49 PM


It's tough to love someone.  Distance makes it more difficult, even if it's only short.  I hope everything works out sis.  Great write.
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6 posted 2002-01-13 05:18 PM


Distance in a relationship makes things a lot tougher so I hope things gets better for you.Beautiful poem and I can't wait to read more.
  Lauren

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Alyssa
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7 posted 2002-01-13 07:34 PM


well aint that just amazin
i get 6 replies when i write a poem off the top of my head but when i take time to write one i get like 4 replies
lol
thanks guys
distance sucks arse but everything is bakc on track
for now

....hey wheres the cream filling?!...

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8 posted 2002-01-15 11:37 AM


Hey homey G,
I know you and josh have "your times" but you know he'll never stop loving you! =P
You have a great boyfriend. Hope everything turns out for yuh!

lylas,
Megz

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FLOOR!¤

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9 posted 2002-01-15 01:36 PM


Just hang in there Alyssa
If you have sour feelings, talk to him about it
communication helps a lot
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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10 posted 2002-01-16 09:53 PM


Love hurts... but to avoid repeating everything acire said, listen to him.  He knows what he's talking about   *hugs*  Hand in there.

--Marie

'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.'

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