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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2002-01-11 04:21 PM

crying
simple little tears,
flowing down my face.
maybe we can work this out
you say
maybe we can work this out.
silence
like a hand around my throat
it holds me.
maybe we can work this out
you say
maybe we can work this out.
no
don't call, don't write
leave me alone.
maybe we can work this out
you say
maybe we can work this out.
never
we can never fix the past
we can't know what the future holds.
no
we can never make life ours
we can never work this out.
and still you say
maybe we can work this out
maybe we can work this out.

I don't even want to hear your voice in the backround of my mind.

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

1 posted 2002-01-11 07:46 PM

yo sis, email me tell me whats goin on girl!
babybowman22@hotmail.com
i enjoyed this, its kinda different from your previous posts, but i totally liked it.
EMAILME

....hey wheres the cream filling?!...

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-12 01:44 AM

You definately have a lotta anger goin on in this poem and you expressed your feelings and emoti know how you feel...ughhh u just wanna scream!!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2002-01-12 01:14 PM

I sorta like the very last line. It creates a certain impact.

Whether things should be worked out depends on how much you care about that person and the relationship. But sometimes when you're hurt beyond hope, and there is no longer any trust, it's rather useless to work things out. I hope you'll get over this phase soon.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2002-01-12 02:49 PM

Oooh I like...this is angry. Very nice job here.

Sometimes it's best to say goodbye.

Jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

Missthang
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since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

5 posted 2002-01-12 11:30 PM

granted, i don't know the whole situation but i know this full of A LOT of anger and pent-up frustration. it almost seems as if this isn't the first time this person has screwed up. in that case, i think it is time to say good-bye. but i believe that everyone deserves a second chance. if you haven't given him one i say that's an option. good write.
-ab

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
-Thaddeus Golas

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

6 posted 2002-01-13 10:52 PM

I agree with Missthang, but sometimes they don't deserve a second chance, stand your ground and don't be walked over! Remember there is love in the world!!

Great peice!!!

MelZ!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2002-01-15 01:55 PM

This reminds me a lot of a song I know called "Letting Go". I liked this... sometimes letting go is the hardest thing to do, but always feels awesome when you're finally over it.

Good write, and good luck.

--Marie

'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.'

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2002-01-15 05:41 PM

The future is what you make it to be
Give it a chance Allysa
Just give it a chance
thanks for the read
keep em coming

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

9 posted 2002-01-16 02:07 PM

this is gripping, very powerful poem me likes

*Pixie*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

10 posted 2002-01-22 12:47 PM

Thanks all.

Acire, it's over between me and Justin.
It's gone, i'm over it, but believe it or not, I don't think he quite is. His girlfriend is best buds with a close friend of mine and she's been thinking about dumping him lately... I'm like his "safety" in all this. Well, not anymore... I got to go find Cole...

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

11 posted 2002-01-22 05:30 PM

haha good for you

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

12 posted 2002-01-25 03:53 PM

Cole's best friend Mike came home w/ me and my buds for lunch today and he now knows that I like Cole so I believe he passed the message on.......

and Justin will be incredibly pissed to know that Mike was in my room, sitting on my bed, playing my guitar. (thats not as wrong as it sounds) But you know what? I don't care.

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

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