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Domzi
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0 posted 2002-01-10 08:22 PM


I sit here and wonder what you do
After we have an argument...
After we have a fight
We don't call one another...
Because we have too much pride to make the first move
My insides burn with anger...
My anger tries to erase each morsel of emotion I have for you
I would hate myself if I lost you...
I would feel defeated if I call you
But I love you!

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Jose Marti
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1 posted 2002-01-11 02:21 AM


well i have to say that this sort of thing doesnt last forever
as you get older ther things such as "post argumental sex"
can I say that here?
but if you guys argue too much, maybe It just wasnt meant to be.

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2 posted 2002-01-11 11:41 AM


I think there should be something called compromise. Both of you would probably be feeling this way, but then to reconcile, you'd have to meet on some middle ground. That is if neither of you could let go of your prides. But if you really do love that person, it doesn't matter how much anger you feel, coz the bottomline is, you love him/her.

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3 posted 2002-01-12 01:46 AM


This sounds like my exact relationship with my boyfriend! We're both stubborn and all that crap....i hear ya!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Domzi
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4 posted 2002-01-12 11:38 AM


Mon Cherie: Thanks for your reply.
Jose Marti: I hope that when we make
up that it'll be explosive (hehe)
ShugarHigh: It sounds like you
understand exactly where I'm coming
from, and I hope it works out with
you and your boyfriend as well. Just
keep your head up!

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5 posted 2002-01-14 06:41 PM


But making up is the best part!!  

I liked this... it's so true.  Pride always gets in the way of everything, eh?
I enjoyed this.
I hope to see more soon.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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