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DragonFang
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0 posted 2002-01-10 04:53 PM


You whom I call love
Forever shall my heart
Beat in union with yours
For you are whom I call love

You who my love runs deep
For only you can my soul keep
From falling into the pits below
For my love strong for you

My love, my love
I have told you dear
That of all my fear
Lossing your love ranks up there

My beautiful, My dearest
My angel, my nearest
have I told you
I love you still?

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Erin
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1 posted 2002-01-10 04:56 PM


This is a really good poem...I especially like the part...

My beautiful, My dearest
My angel, my nearest
have I told you
I love you still?

You got straight to the point!!!

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

mistic
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2 posted 2002-01-10 06:03 PM


Thanks sweetie, it cheered me up, even if it was just for a bit... Love you
Lennon2002
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3 posted 2002-01-10 06:13 PM


nice post

What would you say I i said to you, its not in what you say, its in what you do?

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4 posted 2002-01-12 01:41 AM


This is such a beautiful poem....kinda short but s your feelings strongly throughout. Great job!!!!!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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5 posted 2002-01-12 11:32 AM


OH... this is so sweet!!!! of coz, your love will know that you love her... Juz keep on telling her...

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6 posted 2002-01-14 06:40 PM


"...lately, that I love you."     Good song.

I really enjoyed this poem.  Very sweet, and heartfelt, indeed.  Made me think of good times   So thanks for the trip down memory lane, and share more soon!

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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