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XTC_AngeL
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since 2000-06-04
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Australia

0 posted 2002-01-10 09:12 AM


I'm sorry that I never gave,
You and I a chance,
And I'm sorry that I fell,
In love with you at first glance.

I'm sorry that I never made,
As much effort as you'd have liked,
And I'm sorry that you never saw,
How much that I cried.

I'm sorry that I never told you,
Just how I felt inside,
And I'm sorry that it seemed like,
Itook you for a ride.

I'm sorry that I never got,
A chance to physically love you,
And I'm sorry that I didn't say,
That how I feel is new.

I'm sorry that I never came,
Around that fateful night,
And I'm sorry that because of it,
We had that horrid fight.

I'm sorry that I never realised,
Just what you meant to me,
And I'm sorry that it's too late now,
For us to ever be...

¤XTC AngeL¤


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~*brittt*~
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since 2001-05-09
Posts 76
East Haddam, CT
1 posted 2002-01-10 09:25 AM


Awww..this was so sad and i think that maybe you should tell this person how it is you feel ok and hopefully things will get better for you.
~britt~

Erin
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Posts 2527
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2 posted 2002-01-10 05:05 PM


This is a really good poem!!! Whoever this is for must mean alot to you...

I'm sorry that I never realised,
Just what you meant to me,
And I'm sorry that it's too late now,
For us to ever be...

Thats the best part...

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
3 posted 2002-01-10 06:02 PM


Very sad poem and it's full of lots of emotion.It's a hard thing to deal with I know so I hope things get better for you.Keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

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4 posted 2002-01-12 01:42 AM


Aww sweety...never say never....I'm sorry about your situation though, too often we dont know what we have until its gone...::hugs::

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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5 posted 2002-01-12 01:18 PM


This reminds me of something I've once heard.
If he/she doesn't love you as much as you think you should be loved, it doesn't mean that he/she doesn't love you with all his/her heart.

It might be too late to make things up, but most importantly, you must know that with this, you've learnt a lesson. It'll take some time for you to fill the void in your heart, but I'm sure you'll find someone.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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6 posted 2002-01-14 07:16 PM


I'm sure you're more than forgiven.
This is a hard situation.  I'm sorry that you have to go through it.  Stay strong
I enjoyed this, and look forward to more.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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