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0 posted 2002-01-10 03:59 AM


why can't you let me love you?
do you have any idea how i feel?
we hav so much in common.
but you don't love me.

i wrote you letters of love.
just so you could see what you mean to me.
but you don't love me.

i'm writing this poem with love.
hoping you will know how i feel.
your in my mind 24/7.
i can't let you go.
but i must.
because you don't love me.

some say i'm foolish.
others say it's right.
what am i to do?
will you love me one day or will i keep dreaming?
this poem is to my ex sean who i loved for so long but finally let him go.

i have a wish but only a certain guy can fufill it!

© Copyright 2002 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-10 04:12 AM


Letting go of someone is hard girl...But one day you would have to do it...And its better to let go as soon as you can...Nice work on the poem!!!

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

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2 posted 2002-01-10 10:59 AM


Ahhh reminds me of the song "Letting Go"

"Don't call me don't write- don't show up in the middle of the night....this is letting go..."

*sniff sometimes it can be hard...
But you know what, I think you've inspired me here.
Nice poem.

Jenn

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3 posted 2002-01-10 07:05 PM


Letting go of someone you love can be hard, but sometimes it's for the best. Nice poem.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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4 posted 2002-01-12 01:36 AM


Aww hun ::hugs:: this was very sad but well expressed

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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5 posted 2002-01-12 10:50 AM


It's really true that letting go of someone you love is really difficult. But you're young, and should always look forward. One day, you'll find someone who's going to love you as much as you love him

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6 posted 2002-01-12 09:41 PM


*hugs Robi*

Aw, hun! It hurts, doesn't it? But believe me when I say that it WILL get better. Maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow, but evetually it will. Thanks for sharing!

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7 posted 2002-01-14 07:22 PM


((hugs)) Indeed, a very hard situation to have to be put through.

Love is so confusing sometimes.  I hope things get better... Good luck.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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