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Baby_Angel123
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0 posted 2002-01-09 03:08 PM



I remember when,
I first became interested in you.
You were everything,
I had ever dreamed of.

I wanted to tell you,
but I was afraid.
I didn't think,
you would fall,
for someone like me.

You would always,
talk about the girls,
that you liked.

Girls that I would never be.

But to my surprise,
a year later,
you asked me out.

Come to find out,
you had liked me for a while,
but was just to afraid,
to tell me.

If only,
I had known,
what I know now,
would I have told you,
I liked you sooner.

© Copyright 2002 Heather - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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1 posted 2002-01-09 06:02 PM




Awwww that is such a sweet poem!!!

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

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2 posted 2002-01-09 06:27 PM


Aww very cute!! It's a shame that both of you wasted so much time that you coulda been together because you were both too scared that the other wouldnt like u!! LoL kinda ironic but a cute story!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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3 posted 2002-01-09 06:51 PM


Yeah it is ironic and you don't notice it untill you've gone out with her and you think about it and talk about when you first started liking each other.  I love the poem my love!!  Very well done!  I hope to see more good poems coming from you in the near future!!
~love you Always,
   Your's

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