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Lil_Angel123
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0 posted 2002-01-08 08:02 PM



This is a new poem that i just wrote!
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We were happy together
everything that was there was great
I loved you
She tried her harest to get in the middle
She got her wish
She wanted what we had
and that was true love
it was ever lasting
I knew deep inside that i would alwayz love you
Then that horrible day came
you had to go away
you left me with questions
that were never answered
Then all my dreams and hopes came true
you came back for me
you and me became us again
I finally saw you again
My heart knew
that i woukd never want this to end again
I was happy once again
youre the only one that can make me that happy
Spending that one day with you
almost seems like a dream
but deep inside i knew i wasnt
you alwayz said that
i was youre baby
i was youre girl
You loved me with all youre heart
No one could stop that
After that day,
you never called
It seems as if i woke up from that dream
and now i am in a nightmare
It is soo unreal
Was i dreaming?
I must of been because it seems as if
it ment nothing to you!

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1 posted 2002-01-08 10:49 PM


Aww hun ::hugs::...there r so many stupid people out there that i'd just love to smack for getting in between people...i know too many people who play that role and i've delt with many people in my own situations..i was devious and a lil bit of a devil and a lotta other things i cant say right here ::cough cough::...but do whats best for u..if you want him, fight for him! wether it be a dream or reality!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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2 posted 2002-01-09 08:57 PM


good poem. I've been there.. sometymes i still wonder what would have happened if hed ever called back...

If I held a star everytyme
he made me smile,I'd have the
evening sky in my palm, if
one was removed for every tear
he caused, I'd be emptyhanded.

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