navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » Why...
Teen Poetry #5
Post A Reply Post New Topic Why... Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Belle19
Junior Member
since 2001-12-17
Posts 19
California

0 posted 2002-01-08 06:54 PM


Why does she do this?
Why
Why
This is what I ask myself
Time and Time again.
Am I suppose to learn something?
What am I suppose to learn?
What?
What?
My heart hurts like it has never did before.
My tears flow like there is no end.
To know you inflicted my life so much,
I will never forget.
I just miss you,
I miss you very much.

"If you don't like something, change it.  If you can't change it, change the way you think about it" :-)

© Copyright 2002 Belle19 - All Rights Reserved
Android 17
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664
Winnipeg
1 posted 2002-01-08 07:06 PM


Hmmm...good write here! Although, personally I think you should've only had one "Why" and "What" but it's still good. The calmness brought at the beginning of this peace is broken by the last few lines. I like that!
xShUgArHiGhx
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
2 posted 2002-01-08 10:54 PM


Awwwww sweety ::hugs::...im sorry your hurting you expressed your feelings well and thats a good thing to do when ur upset Feel better!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » Why...

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary