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Yezea, your Angel
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since 2001-06-08
Posts 11
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-07 11:02 PM


To this guy, who once really cared about me
The one I prefered to ignore
To this guy that called me last night
And knew how make laugh my sad heart
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I'm a criminal

I admit, Yes I admit
About that, I wouldnt be able to lie
Crime against heart, I did

If think of someone else
Is a crime, Im guilty
To think about you

If care about someone else
Is a crime,Im guilty
To careabout you

My mind cannot keep the control
My heart is just a bit crazy
But to fight against myself, Im too lazy

Lets my feelings go away
Keep them if they are in your good way
You know that it will be only for somes days
anyway

If it was a crime to tell you
Forgive me to be your sweet criminal


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For those day which we need too much love.. for those day which everything seems wrong.
It was only one of those day, he was in my way to recomfort me. No more no less.. Only somes words to express

© Copyright 2002 Zeah - All Rights Reserved
TopGunLauren
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1 posted 2002-01-08 01:14 AM


Interesting poem I really liked it keep up the awsome work.
   Lauren

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2 posted 2002-01-08 12:44 PM


I liked this a lot!!! Thanks for sharing Look forward to reading  more

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3 posted 2002-01-08 07:35 PM


Hmmm...interesting form. I enjoyed this one very much---again, it's interesting.

The trick is to know when to walk away---and TO KNOW WHEN TO RUN!!!

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