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BrokenAngel
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0 posted 2002-01-07 06:59 PM


This poem was the very first I wrote and it was published by the International Library of Poetry.


Follow me into the night
Come away from the light
Follow me into the world of immortality
Come away from a world of death
Follow me into the world without fear and pain
Come away from a world of suffering

Follow me
I will guide you
I will help you

Come with me
Spend all eternity with me
You will never want to go back
Follow me into the night


---Night Angel

© Copyright 2002 Hannah Rochelle Garner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-07 07:43 PM


Loved it, loved it! Fantastic write. Clear, deep, inspiring, well written. What can I say? I loved it. I think you'll like it here, writting like that.

Sincerely,
Titus

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2 posted 2002-01-07 08:01 PM


thats pretty awsome, 1st poem u ever wrote got published??  sweet dealy for u!    this is pretty good... i liked it much!
      ~Kimmie

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3 posted 2002-01-07 08:41 PM


Awesome poem and congrats on getting it published especially if it was the first one you wrote!! Great job!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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