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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2002-01-06 07:31 PM


herez a poem i started on tonite it not done tho!!!!!

Far apart our friendship
Is like a sailboat riding over the waves
To find each other
At heart.
Dangers ahead fear all around
Time is fast not fast
As fast as our hearts beat of
Been so proud of one other.
Sun shines braking
Up the clouds to give
Us strength
To find our way home.


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1 posted 2002-01-07 01:38 AM


Very good so far I cant wait to see what you add on to it!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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2 posted 2002-01-09 01:40 AM


Got a good start! Can't wait till you finish it!

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