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Daddy's Little Girl
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just_me Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 19 |
Sitting alone no one to listen I hear my own heartbeat as it starts to quicken faster and faster it's picking up pace almost as if I am running in a race the harder it beats the more it hurts all because of those few little words I say nothing's wrong that everything's okay but all I want to do is run far far away Get away from this madness find a place to call my own that's all that I'm asking when I say "leave me alone" Do you not understand that I can't change what's wrong? it's only been a few years but it feels like so long I feel like I am just going to burst like a knife cutting through me Oh, how it hurts No matter what happened you showed love for me even after the time I snapped off your little tree From combines and cornfields to your big comfy chair and that time that you let me cut my own hair Where ever you went I always tagged along and you never got mad when I did something wrong The time we had together was cut way to short we didn't have time to finish building my fort You left so quick without a goodbye as I remember that night I am starting to cry I miss you so much I want to turn back time even it only to say "I love you" one last time All I want is to see your face and tell you how much I miss your embrace No matter what happens or where likfe takes me in this world I want you to know I will still be "Daddy's Little Girld" *My father died 15 years ago this Christmas. I was only 6 years old. It has always been a hard time for me, but this year it was even harder... |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
AWW I really feel for you on this poem! I knwo it must still hurt so much inside-just make sure you hold on to the memories, good or bad! And I'm sure your Dad is always watching over in his spirit! This oem is beautiful-hope your ok. keep up the nice work!  |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a sad poem but had so many wonderful memories in it. Im sorry to hear about your loss...::hugs:: ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
wow!!! i can honestly say that this is one of the best pieces that i have ever read in my ENTIRE LIFE. you out-did yourself this time! and i feel your pain hun. it's full of soooo much emotion and hurt yet it's "darklike" (if that makes sence). best 2 stanzas...right here: The time we had together was cut way to short we didn't have time to finish building my fort No matter what happens or where life takes me in this world I want you to know I will still be "Daddy's Little Girl" good write. remember who i am when you become famous one day :-P "Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it. |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
oops, i meant it's not "darklike" sorry |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Wow, I'm amazed! This poem---well, it's safe to call this a tearjerker. I LOVE the way you recalled memories---and contrasted them to your current situation. I really felt the emotion---I never knew my father. He abandoned me and my mother---I'm glad to hear that your time with you father was filled with love...then again I'm sad to hear your loss. I'd be having a hard time still too...Godspeed. The trick is to know when to walk away---and TO KNOW WHEN TO RUN!!! |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
It was a great poem. I'm sorry for what happened. *huggles* "Everything's fine" |
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