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The Space Within The Mind (Celestial)
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The Space Within The Mind (Celestial) |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
The Moon having no light no warmth of it's own looks to the sun to warm it's lonely desolate exterior Having two faces one never sees the light one afraid to give it up another afraid to accept it The Sun not concerned with the moon shines for all to see complete in itself not wanting nor needing the light of another supplying the moon with light to fuel the paradox supplying the planets with fuel for the day all these self involved bodies oblivious to the fact they are not special not the only ones with light to share "It is better to have loved and lost than to have never have loved at all" ...but the pain of both is equally unbearable... [This message has been edited by Poet on Acid (01-07-2002 12:05 AM).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Very cool... no.. chouette! (I learned a new word today. haha) I liked it a lot. It was very, very interesting to read and it had so much depth and meaning. Thank you for sharing this. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
The was very good. it was cold... like the moon and sun can remind someone of a greedy person, i really enjoyed it. Regina |
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