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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2002-01-05 12:56 PM


January 4, 2002, 9:40 PM

I Lost Him
He broke my heart
Let my soul fade away
Like a painting
Let me body drowned in tears.
I lost him
He hurt me a lot
He left me without saying good bye
He’s not here to protect me
I only wanted him to stay by my
Side forever.
I lost him
Time goes by
I still wish I could tell him
I miss him only
I can tell him in my dreams
In my thoughts.
I lost him
Tomorrow may give me
Strength but I know
I’ll never get over him
And what we shared together
One day I hope to wipe way
These tears and bury
This pain.
I lost him.


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1 posted 2002-01-05 12:52 PM


the memories will remain, but the tears will dry, and your heart will heal.....(((hugs))) sorry you are hurting right now
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2 posted 2002-01-05 07:11 PM


Im sorry that you lost him hun ::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2002-01-06 02:29 PM


I know how you feel baby doll.  I've been in the same shoes.  I love the poem, it really sums up the feeling.  It will be ok, "if you love something, let it go, if it comes back to you it's yours, if it doesn't, it never was."(DMX)
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4 posted 2002-01-06 03:15 PM


Awwww... yeah I feel this.
That "drowned in tears" feeling. BLAH
*sniffff

nice work
Jenn

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5 posted 2002-01-06 03:31 PM


I feel for you on this one!  I totally know how you feel as it happened to me not long ago...but keep yer chin up, coz it will get better!   the poem is great tho!!
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6 posted 2002-01-06 06:28 PM


Wow; I enjoyed this piece, especially the ending. I hope you're doing a little bit better: day by day my friend. We're here for you. Good luck...

Sincerely,
Titus

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