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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-01-04 08:14 PM

The Moon
dark and cold
no warmth
no comfort
circling around
a blue-green goddess
it can never touch
trying
as hard as it can
it can never feel
the slight curving hills
and silky flowing oceans
it can never enjoy
the soft sweet smell
of the earth's gentle breezes
the moon forever trying
to embrace a heavenly body
the earth forever denying
the slightest of affection

"It is better to have loved and lost than to have never have loved at all" ...but the pain of both is equally unbearable...

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-01-04 09:30 PM

...very impressive & intriguing... it's goin' in the library.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

2 posted 2002-01-05 06:28 PM

this was great.I liked This a lot. Great work here.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2002-01-05 10:55 PM

Hey, POA!! Haven't seen you around these parts in... well, for a while! It's good to be reading your poetry again...

I really enjoyed this. The imagery rocked, and it left me with a bittersweet aftertaste that I couldn't quite swallow... I love it

I hope you're around to stay for a while... I would love to read more, hopefully soon.
Good to see you back

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

4 posted 2002-01-06 11:19 PM

hey hey PoA! long time no see. ive missed reading from you (thinks shell do a quick search later). glad to see you posting again and want to see more. i enjoyed this alot. well written and great imagery. hope all is well for you. keep writting
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-01-07 02:07 AM

I must say this was beautifully written hun

Nicely done!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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