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Teen Poetry #5

Autumn

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-01-04 04:52 PM

Lightly brushing the canvas,
The twilight enchants us;
It lowers our voices
And heightens our senses.

Do you hear the boisterous
chants now?
Those are winds cheering on our hostess, --
Autumn dances.

Is it she that employs us?
Is it she that commands us?
Are we the sum of our choices?
Or the sum of chances?

Does it matter? –
Rejoice now!
In a frenzy,
Autumn's spinning us senseless.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (01-04-2002 05:56 PM).]

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

1 posted 2002-01-04 06:21 PM

I LOVE this poem! I like the way you make Autumn appear to be a person! It's BRILL! Keep Up the good work I'd love to see more!

prov1717
Member

since 2001-12-26

Posts 74
NE

2 posted 2002-01-04 06:40 PM

hey hey, great poem, i love the flow of it, keep them coming.

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2002-01-04 08:56 PM

Autumn truly dances in your words

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

4 posted 2002-01-05 12:10 PM

This poem is awesome!
I love it, to the library it
goes, great work!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

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