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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-01-03 11:40 PM


(This one is for anybody who has lost a loved one.)


Did it come so easily?
Because you were all I have known..
Does your heart rest peacefully?
Mines damaged, how to I dont know..
But I....
Well I know...
I hated the day when you had to go,
I didn't say all the things that I wanted to say,
and I cant take that when you're taken away.
but I feel you...
ohh I feel you near me...
I didn't say all the things that I wanted to say,
and I cant take that when you're taken away.
but I feel you...
ohh I feel you near me...

Did it come so painfully?
A lovers dance we had sown..
Why must you leave so gracefully,
I'm damaged, you're all that I've known.
But I..
Well I know....
Goddamnit why did you have to go?!?!?
I didn't say all the things that I wanted to say,
and I CANT TAKE THAT WHEN YOU'RE TAKEN AWAY
but I feel you....
ooh I feel you near me...
We cannot go back.
Can't go back.
I cant go back.
I must go on...
I must go on...(why?)
I didn't say all the things that I wanted to say.
and I cant take that when you're taken away..
but I feel you..
ohh I feel you near me.



Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

© Copyright 2002 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
chasing rain
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1 posted 2002-01-03 11:50 PM


I've heard this one before, sung by Plumb, actually...great song. *nods*
I got the CD with it on it too! ^_^ YAY! Except there were small slight changes in this one...o_O;

++ Leah ++

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

[This message has been edited by chasing rain (01-03-2002 11:52 PM).]

EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2002-01-04 12:17 PM


yeah.. the cats out of the bag! (blushing)
i love that song, dont you? yes i did change it around.. to something that would be meaningful, and doing so has brought me to closer meaning with what that song conveys so well

EagleScorpion
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3 posted 2002-01-04 12:19 PM


TRANCE NATION AMERICA V.2
12.PLUMMET
   DAMAGED

this is what you're talking about, right?

chasing rain
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4 posted 2002-01-04 12:23 PM


Uhm...

No? ^^; Heh. I'm talking more like...no, wait. What am I talking about? o_O; I have "The best of Plumb track 9"...o_O; Like that means anything.
Well, anyways...I hope all is well with you. ^^ Peace...

++ Leah ++

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

[This message has been edited by chasing rain (01-04-2002 12:24 AM).]

EagleScorpion
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5 posted 2002-01-04 12:30 PM


Hmm... looks like I stole this from somebody who stole it from somebody else!!, and besides, who ever said you could own words, sure, the publishers.. hey.. a good thing can have many faces... yea all is well with me thanks for hoping.. ummm.. what was i saying.. oh yea what i got out of writing this is an impression of a mind repeating these thoughts of loss over and over again because it cant find any closure.. but is reassured by the feeling of a caring presence, but left only to play it over again.. such a painful loss this must be
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