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Midnight keep"- Dedicated to Anonymous Albert...
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Midnight keep"- Dedicated to Anonymous Albert... |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
He ran to the window and stared in the sky And wishing, he closed his beautiful eyes And all that he wished, was all on his mind To fly, to fly He could if he tried. He trudged down the stairs, Sleep still in his eyes Wandering about Unafraid of surprise. His cloak hid his shadow, His breath undefined And little was known of his phantom disguise. He darted through cupboards, He scampered through rooms, He crawled through a window And stole the blue moon. He danced to the music Of midnight and stars And he raced his space rocket To Venus and Mars. And finally dawn Awoke from her sleep To find the moon missing, And in this boy's keep. She begged and she begged To have her love back And guilt filled the boy, So he opened his sack. The moon floated up towards the bright sky And hid behind clouds as he waved a goodbye. And little tears stained the little boy's cheek... As he silently wished he had wings in his keep. *Dedicated to Anonymous Albert...* + + + + + *hugs Alby* ^_^ This is a bit like my "Seraph" poem, and a bit like my "Beautiful Eyes" poem (which I have yet to post), this one is an "inbetweener" kind of poem. ^^; *duh* Well, anyways, I'm hoping I'll get my scanner fixed so that I CAN post "Beautiful Eyes". Although no one has any idea what the scanner has to do with it...o_O; Well, you'll soon see...IF I GET MY SCANNER FIXED!!! *mumble grumble snuffle socks~~~* Well, enjoy, little ones (like I should talk, eh? Heh). ^_^ *pats everyone on the head* ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (01-04-2002 12:32 AM).] |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow this is absoloutely wonderful Leah, i really enjoyed the read. Your use of language is really beautiful and I was absoloutely captivated throughout, hope to see more inspiring peice like this  Andrew Join the Imperial Space and Navy and become a Ti(tus) fighter. ;) |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*speechless* ima e-mail you, LEAH. --------------------------------- "say something..." ...i cant "what you MEAN you cant!" *sigh* "dont you sigh at me?" --------------------------------- Thus, was the conversating voices in ALBYs head. o_O; Hey...#25437 What! You in there? Yea, im in here. ok [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (01-04-2002 12:23 AM).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Leah, Leah, Leah... You've done it again. Another thread into my library. Another beautifully-written post to make me absolutely jealous. Another... well, yes, you get the picture. I am more than impressed with this. The images you've portrayed are amazing. This poem brings tears to my eyes, so I know it must mean heaps to Shnookums. *sigh* This is beautiful. Simply outstanding. (*gasp* And now Marie is at a loss for words.) *whispers* Enjoy this while it lasts, it doesn't happen often. *tip-toes out, but not before clicking the "into library" button* --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) [This message has been edited by Fading Away (01-04-2002 11:38 AM).] |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
You are really beginning to annoy m, Leah...Just once I'd appreciate you posting something that doesn't leave me in awe.  HeHe, And LOOK! You made MArie speechless! *SNaps a pic and sends it to the press* Anyway, I'm stunned! Awesome visuals in my head...I felt like I was right there...the description was terrific..I love this! *Pinches Albys cheeks* tehehehe... Off I go...Thanks for the read, as always it was greatly enjoyed! "I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
wow this was awesome, i loved it. great job here. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
awwwwwwww, Leah. I don't know what to say! It was simply...beautiful. *wipes a tear from her eye* I am soooo jealous of you! I wish I could write like that. You write these beautiful, AMAZING pieces of poetry!! *kicks your scanner* I hope it works again soon, I can't wait to see this other poem you're talkin about! |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this is awesome, incredible use of words here |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww how cute!!!! I like it a lot!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooo....wow. This is beautiful. Albertia will be happy. That's two you've written about him now (as long as I can remember anyway  ) The rhyme scheme is wonderful. It's different and reads extremely well. As per usual.OMG! A freakin' white tail just crawled over my hand. *screaming* And it didn't bite...Must smell too much like cigarettes...  Anyway Madam Fajita, your brilliance exceeds that of this mortal realm. Write a book damnit. The world would love you. Widabeff If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Hehe, the world already loves me. ^_^ (hahaha, that's funny.) Much thanks to Alby for the inspiration! And to everyone who commented! ^^ Arigato. ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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