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gymnast
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since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

0 posted 2002-01-03 05:26 PM

Emotions.

You made me so happy
When I was with you I felt joy!
My head felt all floaty and up in the sky.
You were my one and only boy.
Love.

I saw with another girl.
You looked so happy together.
Holding hands, laughing, talking.
You looked together forever.
Jealousy.

I confronted you.
We argued over her for ages.
Boy, you made me SO mad!
The third emotion of my stages.
Anger.

You protested your innocence.
Said she was your cousin.
How could I believe that?
Do you always snog cousins?
Mistrust.

The arguments dragged on.
The time flew past.
And when you said it’s over
I felt the pain come so fast.
Hurt.

I sat around thinking of you.
Of all the good time we had.
Laughing, talking.
No that your gone, I just feel sad.
Sadness.

Suddenly it hit me.
I was wasting away.
I could live with you.
I could make it through the day.
Enlightenment.

I’ve moved on now.
My new boyfriend is great.
We have the best times.
I’ve enjoyed every date.
Happiness.

This is a poem I wrote to show anyone who has everbeen dumped for someone else(boy or girl-it's not meant to be sexist)that slowly it'll get better!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-01-03 10:33 PM

and you showed it very well...it is a cycle, and it does get better!

and sorry I have to ask, what is "snog"?????

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2002-01-04 12:16 PM

Snog... LMAO!!  That is almost identical to what one of my friends says.  I thought it was just his thing.  Very funny...

I loved this poem.  I thought the whole cycle was clearly expressed.  Very mature words you've put out here, and yes... the cycle does end at happiness.  It just takes a little time.

Very nice work!  I enjoyed this.  And I look forward to reading more from you

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

3 posted 2002-01-04 12:50 PM

SNOG! I love that word. Oh, and the poem kicked butt, too.

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

4 posted 2002-01-04 02:06 AM

i really liked this. good job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

5 posted 2002-01-04 07:20 AM

Thanks to everyone whos read my poem! Keep the comments coming in(good, bad, whatever!) And just incase anyone is wondering a snog is a french-kiss, well it is to me and my friends here in Scotland! Thanks everyone!

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2002-01-04 07:53 AM

Ohhhh thats what snog is !!!! I got a lil confused...i had an idea as to what it was but i wasnt completely shur!
Im glad to see that you were able to move on..a happy ending

Nicely done!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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