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Allysa
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0 posted 2002-01-03 04:31 PM


I don't understand you.
You tell all my friends
that you can't stand me.
Yet you call me and we talk
and I'm your new best friend.
You just want someone
to listen to you.
I don't understand
the way your mind works.
You're there one minute
and gone the next.
You've never been there
when I needed you
and when I forget you,
you come back.
I don't understand
the way your mind works.
Or atleast the way it works
around me.


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1 posted 2002-01-03 06:30 PM


Ah yeas, the human mind is one of life's great mysteries. Even if you thought you did know how it works,you'd probably be wrong.
You expressed your feelings well
great work

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you.  Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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2 posted 2002-01-04 12:05 PM


Aargh... what a pain in the arse.  I know someone like this, and it's so frustrating.  But sometimes walking away shows more strength than anything else.  *hugs*  A very hard situation... good luck.  

--Marie

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3 posted 2002-01-04 01:31 AM


don't you just HATE that....?
As soon as you start to feel okay without them around...here they come crawling back again. Arses.

Nice write here girly, I miss ya in teen chat...You need to stop by more often!
Be good and keep up the great writing!

"I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson
  

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4 posted 2002-01-04 08:04 AM


I just hate when people do this!!! It makes everything so confusing...well...hun if you think he's using you then kick the boy to the curb cuz no one deserves to be used like that!!! And maybe...you should kinda confront him about what your friends are saying..jus to see why he said that stuff ya kno? Nice poem...you expressed yourself well!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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5 posted 2002-01-04 08:17 AM


I totally know what you mean-I think most people have felt this at some time in their lives.  Hope it gets better for you-but keep up the good work with your poems, this ones great!
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6 posted 2002-01-04 08:24 AM


har the one person that acts this way grrr on't ya just get so frustrated? great poem tks for sharing.
robin

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Allysa
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7 posted 2002-01-05 02:33 PM


He called me last night.  The whole talking connection thing is still working okay.
Thanks for the replies.

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