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dawn
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since 2002-01-03
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0 posted 2002-01-03 12:30 PM


You seem so sweet so nice and cute

The sound of your voice fills my head

When you touch me my heart drops and seems to never land

When you hug me it seem like it never ends

Your the only one i want but katies the only you want

In a perfect world we would be together but untill that happens i'll wait forever


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Dark Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-01-03 01:20 AM


Aww.. isn't that sweet. If my memory is correct this is your first post? Well then... Welcome to PIP! This was a nice first post from you. Hang around a while... you'll probably love it here.

The only thing that I fear is to die quietly.

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lil_pwheeler
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2 posted 2002-01-03 01:39 AM


A newbie. nice job. Stick around a while Youll love it here. See ya latter. hope to see more
Pat

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"No one dies a virgin, life screws us all"

TopGunLauren
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3 posted 2002-01-03 02:48 AM


Very sweet poem I liked it keep up the awsome work I cant wait to read more.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


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4 posted 2002-01-03 11:04 PM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

This is very sweet... A very nice tribute for that special someone.  I'm glad you have someone like this in your life... everyone deserves that  

Nice write.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

[This message has been edited by Fading Away (01-03-2002 11:05 PM).]

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