navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » Untitled
Teen Poetry #5
Post A Reply Post New Topic Untitled Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Cinderelly
Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-01-03 12:29 PM


A momentary rush,
blinding lights,
living in a dream-like trance in that instance,
applause breaking throught the wall,
an escape.


Acting.


© Copyright 2002 Jamie - All Rights Reserved
Zukene_Chic
Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152
Cali
1 posted 2002-01-03 12:59 PM


Wow
Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 2002-01-03 01:13 AM


You said it. It was always so thrilling... haha.. anyway, nice poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.

The only thing that I fear is to die quietly.

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

Fading Away
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia
3 posted 2002-01-03 10:58 PM


Applause!

Very well said!  I love theatre, and you summed up powerful emotions of being on stage in very few lines.  I am very impressed!  You have talent... and I am greatly looking forward to reading more of your work  

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

[This message has been edited by Fading Away (01-03-2002 10:59 PM).]

Acies
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
4 posted 2002-01-11 05:14 PM


most enchantingly done
keep it up

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


xShUgArHiGhx
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
5 posted 2002-01-12 01:51 AM


Ya know i never put in words how i felt when i acted but after reading this i think my feelings can relate a lot. Thanks for the read...short and sweet Perfect!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Mon Cherie
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers
6 posted 2002-01-12 12:52 PM


This is short, but you did a good description. Well done!! Hope to see more...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » Untitled

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary